Falling.... Tune i did.
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Posted on Oct 06, 2004 07:33 pm
OmniMind
Member Since: Oct 04, 2004
This is a song I wrote and record Hardly Mixed, not mastered, but I figure if you guys are posting music, so will EYE!...
www.myweb.cableone.net/funeral/falling.mp3
Hope it lives links auto cause i cant remember the HTML tag.
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tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
Oct 06, 2004 07:55 pm man you can SING! wonderful. great acousic teenage want song..... man you hooked me so FAARRR ayaAAAAYa its all thumbs up here. if you wanna see how much better you are i did two falling songs
one Falling Down
two Falling
neither are as good as yours......
members.cox.net/tonyd1970/music
Oct 06, 2004 08:36 pm Thanks man, Im glad you liked it, Listening to yours now.
HuePinnipedal Czar (: 3= Member
Since: Apr 11, 2004
Oct 07, 2004 07:22 am Yeah Omni, 'tis good stuff !!! Y'a really get accoss that cold, lonely, and desperate thing ! Quite good .
LeWaSMember
Since: Oct 09, 2004
Oct 09, 2004 09:10 am dude bring out a cd... id be happy to pay $30 off a shalf.
Oct 09, 2004 12:06 pm neat track man. i like the synths and electronics.
guitar sounds good too. needs a little something to set it right in the mix but thats a small lil thing.
keep it up.
ps. be careful when spying on women from the shadows... some might not like it =P
Oct 09, 2004 07:14 pm i really enjoyed that man. that's a winning verse chord progression.
Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002
Oct 09, 2004 11:13 pm Holy crap can he sing! And welcome to HRC, no need to be bashfull about posting tunes. Most of us love to listen, and help when we can.
Very nice indeed as collapse said, nice use of some synth sounds and the strings are a nice touch as well. Maybe a bit of EQ to set them good in the mix as well.
I dont know if this was what collapse was refering to but the guitar does seem to dissappear now and then in the mix. Again a bit of Eq might fix this.
Your voice sounds very well leveled and I like the echoed part in the chorus, excellant touch indeed.
Over all a well written piece for sure. Hope to hear more from you in the future.
Noize
Oct 10, 2004 06:02 pm omni,
i'd like to ask about what FX treatment you gave your vox. what kind of reverb is that?
olddogMember
Since: Jul 02, 2003
Oct 10, 2004 06:27 pm Very nice indeed. Great vocals, and exceptional song writing, well arranged and executed. Everything sounds great here mix wise.
Dan
Oct 10, 2004 07:00 pm i like how he seems to be doing the cobain thing where the voice breaks on the end syllable. that's hard to do well. some people do it and it sounds overdone and unpleasant