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Posted on May 18, 2003 12:03 pm
flame
...bringing sexy back
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ive got a basic mix of an acoustic tune above - but i think it needs padding out a little with some extra, well, something.
havent got a clue what though - anyone fancy adding something to this? i was thinking of some hammond type organ noises, but surprise me someone! any contributions towards this would be top...
cheers peeps!
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May 18, 2003 04:50 pm i love what you did to the vocals. I can't tell thru my computer speakers, but maybe the giutar needs something, a little EQ to warm up the low end and even out those mid-highs, the scritchy scratchy sound i mean. cool sound effects at the end. maybe that's what you could do, add sound effects and weirdness throughout. Checkout my sample disc in the folder Garrett/textures. Those are long samples of strange noises that go on and on. They make great backgrounds to fill up those "spaces".
Oh, I know what you need here. A bass guitar! Maybe If we can determine a point where the song "kicks in" that that's where it could get heavey. I'd like to hear a bass and some hand drums. Oh what am I saying... Do what you do best.
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 19, 2003 04:50 am thats a thought...i might have a play with them. i thought about having drums and bass and stuff on there, but this is meant to be one of the two acoustic tracks on the album and i dont wana get carried away.
glad ya like the vocal - its actually the same part multitracked 3 times...one compressed, one with delay and one with guitar distortion effects on it. i spent hours messing about with that...and im still not sure that im happy with it!
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
May 19, 2003 01:43 pm hey ill give a shot to throwing some keys up on it tonight. if it doesnt suck ill put it up on the net. its amazing, i already know the words!
May 19, 2003 06:10 pm dude... that needs a moog track, maybe a harpsichord...drums should Q in the song around 1:28 and hmm... now that i listen to it again mandolin or like a bass-line oriented banjo riff would be cool.
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 19, 2003 06:20 pm im open to any offers people...ive done what jamie suggested and added some backing 'textures' but any other input would be brilliant!
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
May 19, 2003 08:44 pm Hey hey fellas, here's what i did.........
(remember this is still in the working stages and he wants it to remain an "acoustic" vibe
i played harmonica with distortion
i played acoustic guitar, with..... delay
give it a check and see if its ok... i have no clue but i dig it and he's asleep in england now....
members.cox.net/stevebaz
right click on "working song"
itll down load a song called "song.mp3"
but thats the swan tune... pls do it now... im dying to hear if i screwed it up or made it better
tonyd
May 20, 2003 02:41 am cool Tony, I like the super wet soupy guitar. Nice harmonica playing
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 20, 2003 06:28 am right, im up!
just downloading tonys effort now...which shouldnt take more than a week on my crappy dial up connection!
i'l let ya know...be interested to see what ya come up with tone - i had a feelin' this was your kinda tune!
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 20, 2003 06:41 am yeah its cool tony, i can definately use some of what youve done.
can ya post a track with just your bits on so i can mix it with what ive got already?
cheers chief!
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 20, 2003 06:45 am btw, my kung fu, feel free to contribute something...i like the moog idea, and the banjo concept's well, umm, interesting!
seriously though, the more the merrier!
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
May 20, 2003 06:55 am ya man, ill do it as soon as i get home.
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 20, 2003 07:11 am cool - cheers tony!
May 20, 2003 07:15 am I can hear a banjo rhythm track in there. I'm weird about the banjo though.
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 20, 2003 07:19 am you're weird about it? like, it scares you?
May 20, 2003 08:08 am No, I'm not scared of it. I just think that the banjo is an instrument has alot of untapped potential. I feel the same way about the mandolin and dobro also. You hear so many different takes on guitar sounds and I think that a banjo is one of the few unexplored avenues of sound. fleck and triscke (spell?) have done alot of different things with it but most of the time you hear one its just the same ol' thing. Hell, I'm even guilty of it. I'd love to hear a killer banjo riff off a Deering Crossbow (Electric banjo) run through a Mesa on top of a Marshall stack with some nasty distortion on it.
I'm that kinda weird.
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 20, 2003 08:52 am hmmm, sounds interesting if ya put it like that...
May 20, 2003 08:55 am Don't it?
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 20, 2003 09:42 am definately. you got one?
May 20, 2003 11:15 am Nah, that's why I would like to hear it. I got a banjo but just an accoustic. I guess I could record a track and then experiment with some effect manipulation, couldn't I? I might try that.
May 20, 2003 11:29 am Flame, I'm going to try to play with some ideas for you too. I've got some things in mind.
flame...bringing sexy backMember
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May 20, 2003 11:37 am cooooool....im gonna have about a million (slight exageration) songs to chose from at this rate...sweet!
May 20, 2003 11:38 am I have a couple bass lines coming to mind as well...I'll get them in the next couple days...
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May 20, 2003 11:52 am wow, im nearly at TWO million!
May 20, 2003 11:55 am Flame's album title:
The HRC Band - Spanning the Globe
Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
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May 20, 2003 06:25 pm Geez bigfan, now Im hearing the Wide World of Sports theme, and Jim McKays voice going through my head.
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May 20, 2003 08:40 pm Oh and by the way flame, your drum loop is done as of tommorrow. It is almost identical except for the tone of things. I tired to duplicate it to a TEE and I think I got it down. It still even has that old school sound.
May 20, 2003 09:19 pm hey, flame, this might be a silly question, but did you record this to a click track or what? what the hell is the BPM or is it just free-wheelin' through the whole thing?
I have a couple pretty cool basschops worked up and am recording it, but the bpm would help me edit and punch the errors (not that I make many :-)
May 20, 2003 09:49 pm Bass line sitting in your inbox...er, a link to it anyway...do with it what you will...it's a cool tune dude.