Jul 28, 2003 06:27 pm alright bird!
Hey Guys! Guess who's back!!!
Posted on Jul 28, 2003 06:20 pm
Jennster
Member Since: Feb 16, 2003
I ain't been in in ages, so i thought I'd pop on and let you see my new song!!
*Don't Tell Me*
A little girl once said to me
Show me what my life can be
Help me stop my dreams drifting away
I watched a tear fall down her face
Lost with mem'ries she can't erase
Knowing that her life has gone astray
And all her friends, they ignore her
And her parents don't adore her
And it makes me wonder what we're coming to
*chorus*
Don't tell me you don't know
What it's like to fail your dreams
Don't tell me you can't hear
All the dying screams
Don't say you don't believe
Everyone being the same
Just one day let me know
When you've stopped playing this game
This little boy, he walks alone
Doesn't know how much he's grown
'Cause no one's there to save all his tears
No one gave him a second chance
Now he don't get a second glance
Now he's left coping with all his fears
And just because he's old enough
It doesn't make him all that tough
All he needs is one friend in his world
Chorus
I see you alone, asking why
All I do is pass you by
Why should I listen to you
Your childhood you left behind
And in your mind you can't rewind
So now your lost and left without a clue
Chorus
So tell me you that you know
What it's like to fail your dreams
So tell me you can hear
All the dying screams
So Tell me you believe
Everyone being the same
And won't you let me know
That you've stopped playing their game
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Jul 28, 2003 07:12 pm Jennster - are you interested in work on a track over the internet? I have done a couple of pop / acoustic tracks in the past and would be more than happy to collaborate on one.
let me know if you're interested.
Jul 29, 2003 07:48 am hey jen, can i try out an acoustic dealy with your lyrics? full credit will be yours of course.....
Jul 29, 2003 07:49 am ps that means i liked the lyrics.....
Jul 29, 2003 10:59 am He,he,he :-)
Wonder if they'd be falling over themselves to collaborate if you were a guy!
Nice lyric BTW Jenn.
Jul 29, 2003 02:45 pm I dunno if they would. Apparently I seem 26. Must be all the maturity I show off....(Yeah right!!!)
Jul 29, 2003 05:52 pm Hey, Tony.
Yeah you can try whatever you wanna try with my lyrics. Just make them sound good
Jul 31, 2003 08:47 am actually i didnt know jen was a female- so i suppose i would fall all over myself to have a crack a good lyric.
and now, that stipulation on making it sound good....hmmmmm. now im a bit wary. dont really know if thats possible. i have rather limited ability, im a horrblle spelur, my vocals can becume irritating, and i dont record or mix well.
that said, ill give it a shot anyway- i may have alot agaist me but i have one thing, im lucky. better sometimes to be lucky than good...
Aug 01, 2003 06:05 am looking forward to hearing it tonE!
Aug 01, 2003 06:56 am You do understand that my name backwards is Y-NOT.
says alot about me.... ill give it a go tonight.
Aug 01, 2003 07:38 am mad...you got the music written already huh?
Aug 01, 2003 08:41 am i dont write music- (whats the point i cant read it if i did write it.)
i just fiddle and out comes a song. its a gift
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