Inspired to post another song

Posted on May 17, 2003 06:33 am
wingdwolf
Member Since: Nov 24, 2002

Listening to Tadpui inspired me to put this one out there..it was written a while ago and reorder on my tascam.what do you think?
www.nowhereradio.com/wingdwolfproductions/singles

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Tadpui
I am not a crook's head
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Since: Mar 14, 2003

May 17, 2003 10:41 pm

Is the guitar fingerpicked? The notes are very clearly defined.

There's some great imagery there, I get a very desolate picture from the lyrics. Like sitting at the ocean's shore, alone, staring at the sunset. Some element of the chord progression reminds me of Nick Drake, although the powerful vocals take it in a different direction from there.

Good work, keep recording!

glynb
Member
Since: Dec 16, 2002

May 20, 2003 12:47 pm

Very sound stuff. You have a good strong voice. Can't say anything against this one. Presumably you intended a very simple arrangement and chose not to embelish? I don't really think it needs anything adding, though if you have an orchestra handy at your place...maybe towards the end? ;-)

Good job.

Noize2u
Czar of Midi
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Since: Apr 04, 2002

May 20, 2003 08:41 pm

WW, I listened to it and its very good. You do have very strong voice as glynb said. And again very nice tune, easy to listen to.

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Since: Apr 03, 2002

May 21, 2003 02:09 am

wow. i really dig your voice. its got a quality that you dont really hear too often anymore.

the guitar progression was good too. does sort of remind me of nick drake as tadpui stated.

good stuff. keep it up =)