Jan 25, 2009 07:04 pm I'll try and get to this sometime this week. I'm buried at the moment.
The world has let its children down
Posted on Jan 24, 2009 11:28 pm
Sunny
Member Since: Nov 19, 2006
A remix and reaarangement of a song I have posted here before. Does not feel done. But I feel exhausted trying to get ot right. Your thoughts and commenst really welcome to get me focused on fixing the right stuff. The world has let its children down:
www.soundclick.com/sunnyz
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Thanks
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Jan 25, 2009 07:04 pm I'll try and get to this sometime this week. I'm buried at the moment.
Jan 25, 2009 07:29 pm hey mate, can i ask what it is that's bothering you about the mix?
Jan 25, 2009 09:05 pm Just reposted a remix with following changes:
- tighter low end
- better use of automation for instruments to highlight various parts
- less harsh cymbals
- less harsh guitar
- modified fade out
Love any feedback.
Jan 26, 2009 03:59 pm While I really liked the movement you got by adding the automation, the guitars are much better sounding and not as heavy as they were. And yes the cymbals are less harsh as well.
I think you may have tightened the low end too much and all but clamped it out of the mix. While the bass guitar is present it is very low in the mix. And the drums have not low end to them at all any longer. I have listened to previous mix of this and liked it as it was from what I can remember.
There are section's near the end that the vocals appear to me very midrange heavy, It almost sound intentional but I thought I would ask. It would sound good that way if there were more of the low end left in the mix though.
Feb 08, 2009 10:17 pm A remixed version. The previous version had a lot of eq boosts that are always a bad idea and made this sound harsh. Also tried to add some beef to the drums. Comments and thoughts welcome. COnstructive criticism particularly appreciated.
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