Song Feedback Please (r&b type song)

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Member Since: Jul 31, 2006

i recorded this rap group last night. spent about 3 hours on it total. but what do you guys think, what should i add/fix/delete

its called "still searching" the first one

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bace135 in the house tonight!
Since: Jan 28, 2003

Mar 07, 2007 01:02 pm

I actually like this. Reminds me of some older outkast from around 96 or so... (oops, listening to letter to my cousin). I think the drums need to be louder. Voice and piano are more prevalent than everything else.

As for still searching, on the talking intro, don't pan so far to the left. Vocals are louder than everything else, need to fade back into the mix a bit. Singing on the hook is kinda off time, but sounds good. Female rapping is on point flow wise, lyrically, it's ok. Backup rap vocals are kinda panned far right. Didn't know SD cats called each other cuddy... 2nd verse rapping is not on time and flow needs some help, but content is cool. Beat overall is nice, just needs to mix with vocals better.

Czar of Midi
Since: Apr 04, 2002

Mar 11, 2007 08:34 pm

Had a listen as well. I have to agree with coolo and his comments. A little bit more work and the tracks will sound great. Use of extreme panning is fine is some instances, but here I wouldn't use it to that extreme.

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