lets try something different!

Posted on Jun 11, 2006 02:49 am
nephilimvox
Member Since: Apr 24, 2006

ok fellas i want to thank you for all the input on the previous tunes, your help has been invaluable to us.

so, that being said, heres another song for you. just an idea, not fully fleshed out. i know most of the problems, but anything new would be helpfull, and hearing what i already know is wrong, will help cement it into my mind.

no drums or bass, kinda acousticcy (is that a word). hit me back fellas

www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/7399//

it's the second song, but if you want to give the first another listen too, that's kewl with me.

thanks for all your help and keep up the good work fellas.

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Mikendher
muffin
Member
Since: May 13, 2006

Jun 11, 2006 09:40 am

it's good :-)

the part where the song picks up a little... something feels like it needs more reverb.

Noize2u
Czar of Midi
Administrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002

Jun 11, 2006 10:05 am

I'll have to give it a listen later today. But I will get to it sometime today and let ya know what I think.

Noize2u
Czar of Midi
Administrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002

Jun 11, 2006 12:23 pm

The guitar has a good sound to it in the intro. The vocal there though really needs some work. A little compresion to even it out and give it some power. As well some reverb to give it its own space in the mix.

The chorus seems a bit heavy in the low end when you really start hitting the guitar chords harder. And your voice gets left behind. Some EQ to seperate your voice from the guitar and compresion on the vox as well as reverb there would help immensely.

Otherwise very nice tune. My only suggestion arrangement wise would be to add a little something extra in the chorus part. Maybe an extra guitar track with a little differant tone to thicken it up some.

tonyd1970
The fat one always watches us.
Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002

Jun 15, 2006 11:44 pm

put a little effect on the voice, with the efect on the guitar. it sounds mismatched. or better yet, play acoustic, -you gotta voice man- and i love that off time slid on the guitar-
its a good song, and well mixed-
just effect your voice, or defect the guitar, and dont cut off the end...