Bee Boo - Another rough idea

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Czar of Turd Polish
Member Since: Jun 20, 2006

Yet another uncompleted mix from me. I had the riff for awhile and finally decided to add to it. All instruments are played by me so forgive the slop (as well as the BS at the end, i was just noise making).

Is it worth moving forward and also, what the heck does it remind you of? Named "bee boo" after the guitar tones :)

Is also quite bass heavy, my bad I was in a hurry for work and had no mixy time :)

Under my profile in the not completed section....

www.homerecordingconnecti...sic&id=4006

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Sep 25, 2009 12:56 pm

Sounds a little Queens of the Stone Age...I dig it. I vote for finishing it.

Czar of Turd Polish
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Sep 25, 2009 01:05 pm

Oh I think you just opened my eyes. The main riff is QOTSA'ish and the bendy note is almost Alice in chains... I think the mix of the two is why it was confusing me.

Thanks Quincysan!

Prince CZAR-ming
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Sep 25, 2009 02:06 pm

I think it's very good. Sounds like you just need lyrics, and it'll be ready to print =).


Czar of Turd Polish
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Sep 25, 2009 02:17 pm

Haha, maybe a little more than that but thanks PJK :)

Prince CZAR-ming
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Sep 25, 2009 02:50 pm

well, ok, maybe. But the whole contents of the song is there, beginning, middle, verse, chorus, etc. Sounds like all the parts are there, just need to be finished.

Heck, I get parts of ideas, then sit and flounder around with them.

Czar of Turd Polish
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Sep 25, 2009 03:41 pm

I understand that, I have been floundering with the main riff for about a year with the band. I always liked it and got fed up with where it was headed, so I went ahead and finished it all by me lonesome :( Hope they aren't butthurt but I was tired of waiting.

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Sep 25, 2009 05:29 pm

On second listen I've gone from like to love. Man...please don't put those throaty Metallica-esque power vocals on this. I know that kind of thing has a place but this is really a departure from what I've heard you do before and I would love to hear something really Mike Patton in the Dillinger Escape Plan...


Now that I've tromped on your creativity, have a nice day and I can't wait to hear the finished thing, ha!

Prince CZAR-ming
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Sep 25, 2009 06:26 pm

heh heh, butthurt =)




Frisco's Most Underrated
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Sep 25, 2009 08:12 pm

Interesting. I say go with it. Not my main type of music, but I found myself humming a vocal melody and some odd lyrics. I think you could build a cool song out of it.

Veni, MIDI, Vici
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Sep 25, 2009 10:32 pm

Sounds like it has potential to me. Of course I'm no expert in the genre at all, still I enjoyed this one a lot.

Czar of Midi
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Sep 26, 2009 12:29 am

I vote as well to go with it. There is a tiny hint of something else in there as well. I'm having an issue remember the band name though. But either way, I was diggin it. I vote for finishing it as well. Work it out.

And ya, I still need to get to listening to the finished tracks from your last stuff.

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Sep 26, 2009 01:23 am

Sounds like a great start Cpt, put some lyrics and melody in there and I think you've got a good one going. :)

Noize, I think the hint of something might be "Heart Shaped Box".

Dan

Czar of Turd Polish
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Sep 26, 2009 12:54 pm

Throaty metallicaesque vocals :) Haha, which song are you talkin about? I only remember doing that on one song.

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Sep 26, 2009 06:38 pm

Then that's probably the song I'm thinking of, though I can't exactly place which song it was either. Just ignore me and do something bad*ss, hah.

Czar of Turd Polish
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Sep 27, 2009 05:04 pm

Too funny ;) For something badass I better have someone else sing :)

A small pie will soon be eaten
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Oct 02, 2009 10:35 am

Definatley my type of music.

Mate this is fricken cool !!!

Have you got some ideas about the vox?

The start is similar to ...





But your melody, in my opinion, is much better

If you think i could contribute i'd be happy too have a go.

Seems only fair :)

Czar of Turd Polish
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Oct 02, 2009 01:15 pm

I actually do but... I am gonna pitch it to the band at practice today. If they like then it's out of my hands, if they don't then I will proceed forward with it just like the other songs they have turned down. I don't mean that as a negative, I throw alot of weird **** at them, some fits and some does not, all depends on our singer.

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