New Tune- Written and recorded 2 june 08
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Posted on Jun 03, 2008 09:08 am
tonyd1970
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Its gota "grab ya" begining, structure, chorus... its like i followed the rules.
Its another hotel song
Tear the World Down
NOTE: THIS IS NOW VERSION 2 WITH SLIGHT FIXES AND ADJUSTMENTS
members.cox.net/anthony15...rlddownver2.mp3
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tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
Jun 03, 2008 07:26 pm So many new names- so many new folks.
I wish i had more time, turns out the more I spread myself around the more I screw it all up... I just spent a wonderful hour listening to the latest stuff, and only old dogs and cool's i know... these people come in pro's... it's amazing...
congrats noize/db
cooloFrisco's Most UnderratedMember
Since: Jan 28, 2003
Jun 03, 2008 07:39 pm ha ha, who knew tonyd could follow the rules?
I like the song. Comments on the mix:
1) backup vox are too far panned right
2) maybe pull the lead vox back a bit (add a light amount of reverb...?)
Otherwise it sounds pretty good. I really like the lyrics. Nice job tonyd, and good to see you around again!
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
Jun 03, 2008 07:42 pm thanks, i wont be around. i wanted it to sound like 2 guys with 2 guitars on stage havin fun at an al gore convention.
(didnt start that way, but thats how it turned out)
ill re pan thicken and stir, rinse and repeat as you have said...
thanks buddy
cooloFrisco's Most UnderratedMember
Since: Jan 28, 2003
Jun 03, 2008 08:05 pm ha ha, you're a nut!
olddogMember
Since: Jul 02, 2003
Jun 04, 2008 04:11 am I don't know you get such a great sound in a hotel room tony. The guitars sound great, and your vox are great as usual. I agree with coolo on the mix, vox wise, I think I'd bring the backing vox up just a bit as well, though once they aren't panned quite so far they may be loud enough. I like the song as well, nice one!
Dan
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
Jun 04, 2008 06:47 pm haha, i get ALOT of practice in these hotel rooms...
picture a laptop, with an sm57 with and me with beer. thats how i get such a good sound......
try out v2, now uploaded and see if its better
thanks fellas
tonyd
cooloFrisco's Most UnderratedMember
Since: Jan 28, 2003
Jun 04, 2008 07:00 pm I definitely think it's better. Only thing I would say is maybe bring the backup vocals a bit louder or less reverb so they come forward a bit. Thumbs up buddy.
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
Jun 04, 2008 08:45 pm oi-vey. im dun. roll the windows down when you listen, itll sound fine!
i tried, but then i found that eq's clashed, and bits of each were drowning stuff, so instead of reworking, (inorder to get a clean sound in a hotel, i gotta cut vox,guitar parts to just the music) so it was too hard.
im lazy!!!!
Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002
Jun 04, 2008 10:22 pm tony, I'll be getting at it tomorrow evening while I finish cleaning.
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
Jun 12, 2008 06:08 pm you dun cleaning noise? musta been really dirty......
Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002
Jun 12, 2008 10:20 pm Actually I didn't finish until Saturday. But Tuna's grad/going away party is over now. So ya, I'm back in my chair for the most part.
Just catching up on listening. I'll get at it by tomorrow.
Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002
Jun 14, 2008 07:28 pm Nicely done indeed. I liked this one as it was a bit different, not so dark. Like all your stuff it had that distinctive TonyD feel to it as usual. Sounds like you have the bits coolo mentioned pretty well straight now.
Another wonderful TonyD production.
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
Jun 19, 2008 05:06 pm Ya, a really happy song about world destruction.... im definitly reaching into the happy "pop" genere with this one. me and hanna montana on tour..... hahahaha
