Need Opinions on Rough Mix

> > > Need Opinions on Rough Mix

Posted on

Member Since: Jul 23, 2005

This is a new original song that I've been working on. It has sort of a Nine Inch Nails feel to it but it's kind of just weird. I want to know if the visiion I have for it is working. Please listen to the [2 MB] file and let me know if you think the melody, lyrics, arrangement, etc. is working or not. Please be very blunt - I can take the criticism! Thank you!

Download: www.toolboxtech.com/music/untitled3_low.mp3 (2 MB)

[ Back to Top ]


Administrator
Since: Apr 03, 2002

Feb 11, 2006 04:17 pm

I see what you are going for, it's kinda cool/weird...snare was pretty loud (on my bad speaker set).

Member
Since: Jul 23, 2005

Feb 11, 2006 05:33 pm

I have uploaded a new version. Changes include:

- Re-sang verses/chorus with some more polish.
- Last chorus is yelled.
- Ending has a lighter version of the chorus with piano.
- Edited some levels.
- Re-mastered.

Czar of Midi
Administrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002

Feb 12, 2006 12:00 am

Hey brock, it certainly does fit right up with the NIN feel. I like your choice of instrumentation for sure. I am however not sure about all the distortion though. I am going to have to give it another listen tommorrow and see if it sounds differant when played a bit louder as I couldn't crank it up much tonight.

But I do like the vox for sure, they do fit well in the tune. I will have another listen for sure and post again.

> > > Need Opinions on Rough Mix

Related Forum Topics:


If you would like to participate in the forum discussions, feel free to register for your free membership.