Need Another Opinion To Help Critique a Concept

Posted on Apr 03, 2006 06:37 pm
Fuzzy
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Member Since: Dec 25, 2005

I was playing around on the piano before and I came up with a little tune, but I didn't have time to notate it. By the time I got it down it changed a little bit, and I feel like there's something wrong with it, but I'm not sure what it is.

I orchestrated a little concept for the feel of the overall piece and if anyone can hear the problem please do point it out. Any other criticism or suggestions will also be taken gladly:

(Please pardon the compression hiccup in the beginning)

media.putfile.com/OrchestratedSample

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