Stealth Love, Song of my Upcoming Album
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Posted on Dec 23, 2005 05:55 pm
presley_07
Bohemian
Member Since: May 04, 2003
Hey all:)
here's another song for you all:)
pls critize the mix :)
www.artistcollaboration.c...oku/Stealth.wma
here's the lyrics for those interested :
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[size=7]Stealth Love[/size]
Stealth Love
You see me Flying in the sky of love
with radar dodging stealth suit on
No bleeping on a screen of dots
as quiet as can be
They sit inside their homes and have
been thinking how to solve the mess
created at their love address
tortured through the years...
A submarine in kitchen sinks
of people who need confidence
I have an eary preference
for broken hearted girls...
I protect their lives from every man
that's naughty, bad or used his hands
on women, he can't handle them
He'll get his share...
Stealth Love!
when I'm flying ...
Stealth Love!
When your dying... of pain in your heart..
I'm coming as fast I can..
Stealth Love!
when your grieving
Stealth Love!
with love and needing
me.. to come.. save ya... again
I'm magnetic it's a heart effect
acoustic love for lonelyness
you can see me through an optic glass
I'm coming after you
Their counterstealth technology
has nearly no effect on me
my mind is set on saving thee
watch me now and see
Stealth Love!
when I'm flying ...
Stealth Love!
When your dying... of pain in your heart..
I'm coming as fast I can..
Stealth Love!
when your grieving
Stealth Love!
with love and needing
me.. to come.. save ya... again
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Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002
Dec 23, 2005 06:25 pm Damn Presley, very impressive again. You voice has changed a bit since you first came here, but to the good I must say. Very powerfull. I love the intro, pretty kool. The tune is very well writen and the performance is spot on for sure. And yes, teh Queen influance is still there, very good indeed.
Dec 23, 2005 06:33 pm Hey noize:)
thx dude,
yeah my voice has changed a lot in the last 2-3 years
I had vocal lessons each day for the last 2 years, learned a lot of "technique" I didn't have before
my range has expanded about 3 whole notes as well
so it's all good, the thing I miss (when listening, back to very old recordings) is "emotion" in the vocal tracks, Prolly cuz I'm too focused on techniques,
ah well:), can't have it all now can I?:P
thx, for listening dude, much appreciated!
Presley
Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002
Dec 23, 2005 08:52 pm AFter voice training it might take a bit to get the emotion back into your vox, but it will come once you become more comfortable with, and stop concentrating so hard on the technique. It will all work out in the end.
bangbangmofoThecalmlittlecenteroftheuniverseMember
Since: Dec 04, 2005
Dec 23, 2005 09:59 pm bad
***
badass.
olddogMember
Since: Jul 02, 2003
Dec 24, 2005 01:05 am Indeed, agree with Noize another very fine effort. The mix sound very nice to me, could maybe use a bit more hi freq's on the mix just to give a bit of sparkle to it, but could just be my speakers too. :)
I really like the song, I think your vocals have emotion, comes across to me and your voice is excellent. I really like the way you do your harmonies, I've tried to do Queen style harmony but it never works for me, but you pull it off very well. The solo guitar kicks, love the harmony on it. Are you playing all the parts?
Dan
Dec 24, 2005 02:28 am thx guys,
you may be right there OD, I have the High end problem on almost all of my songs, gonna look into that
this is all an Online collaboration again (actually we're an online "band" now)
we're busy with 4-5 songs right now, and we're planning about 10
I wrote the Music and Lyrics
I play Piano and Vocals
Guitars, Bass and Drums are people I met online:)
