new tune

Posted on Oct 21, 2005 08:40 pm
acoustic rain
Member Since: Nov 02, 2004

Just posted this one. Another piano based song, however, the piano is more in the background. Give a listen. Kirk

www.onlinerock.com/musicians/acousticrain

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guitar_jim
Czar of Cheese
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Since: Jun 09, 2004

Oct 21, 2005 08:45 pm

Listening...

Good song,lyrically and melodically. Recording needs a little work...it seems to my ears that the drum and the piano aren't quite in sync with each other. I'd be interested in hearing it as an acoustic piece...with no drums. It's a very cool song. Your voice sounds a little Lennon-esque in places.

Good job!

acoustic rain
Member
Since: Nov 02, 2004

Oct 21, 2005 09:03 pm

Thanks for the listen ... yeah, my production isn't all that. I'm just trying to get the ideas down ... but ... I'll try to get a version up without the drums. Thanks again. Kirk

olddog
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Since: Jul 02, 2003

Oct 21, 2005 09:16 pm

Very nice song, like the melody alot and general feel and sound of the song, though I agree with guitar-jim dropping the drums would probably be a good idea since they are out of sync off and on. Real nice vocals.

Dan

acoustic rain
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Since: Nov 02, 2004

Oct 21, 2005 09:25 pm

Thanks Dan ... I'll check it out. Kirk

Noize2u
Czar of Midi
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Since: Apr 04, 2002

Oct 23, 2005 07:28 pm

Gotta agree with the others comments as well. Very good tune though for sure. I did notice the balance seemed to really lean on the right side though. I am listening to the version without drums and I have to say that drums probably would not fit well in here at all. But if ya work out the balance thing think you will be good to go. I think it sounds like the acoustic is real heavy in the right side so maybe try working that out and it should all be good.

And agree on the vocal work as well, real nice.