New track available, Feedback please

Posted on Aug 27, 2004 11:37 am
riffgod
www.charlienaebeck.com
Member Since: Apr 10, 2004

Hey everyone,

I have released another track on my site www.charlienaebeck.com under the sounds section called Space Drone. If anyone would like to give it a download and provide any feedback I am interested to hear reactions to it. :) Thanks in advance. peace

Charlie

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AK Redline
Seconds From The End
Member
Since: Jun 16, 2003

Aug 28, 2004 08:49 pm

well all i can say is with the mix... invovle some panning, its all so centered.. besdies the parts with chrous and auto panning and what not.. but i think that would liven it up. also with the structure off the songs, involve more chord progressions, something that makes you want to keep listening to me it sounded very bland in a sense that it was the same thing over and over. im not busting your balls im just giving you an honest opinion. but you have cool ideas and id enjoy to hear what yuo have done with other things. keep 'er up, but involve more

riffgod
www.charlienaebeck.com
Member
Since: Apr 10, 2004

Aug 30, 2004 05:31 pm

Thanks for the feedback Redline. yeah, honestly the part that has been bugging me for a while is that the intro keeps lagging in my opinion. I am pretty satisfied with the part after the phaser where the drums kick back in for the bridge/solo if you want to call it that I guess, but the intro and ending could use a bit of spicing up like you mentioned. I actually just demo'ed it as an idea not too long ago and was thinking it might work well for a video game or something.

Thanks much for the honest feedback though. I will go back at it and see what it evolves to. :) If anyone else has any comments or feedback I would appreciate it also. peace

Charlie

tonyd1970
The fat one always watches us.
Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002

Aug 31, 2004 07:09 am

Alittle spice up with the panning- i think its a good "album-ender" type song. and i really liked the guitar sound. the hole thing was pretty smooth. try panning the drum stuff real wide and "floating" the keys around- left, right, up, back, like a ghost breeze, around the guitar sound.
i still give it a thumbs up

riffgod
www.charlienaebeck.com
Member
Since: Apr 10, 2004

Sep 01, 2004 03:57 pm

Thanks for the feedback Tony. I have yet to actually get back in the studio and work on the panning yet. I am currently working on construction of a new studio which mine will be moving to and haven't had time to work on the album in the mean time. lol I will try playing around with the panning though and repost for you guys to check out in a bit. Thanks

Charlie