Jun 11, 2008 07:16 am High hat is a bit too harsh for me... might be a couple syncopation issues in the beginning... other than that... sounds about right.
deathcore demo
Posted on Jun 11, 2008 03:36 am
rich
Member Since: Jun 11, 2008
i wrote and composed this on my pc. i used a behringer distortion pedal with low mids, and a washburn paul stanly. two guitar track, left 70%m, right 70%. thee drumloops were made with acoustica beatcraft. and it was mixed with audacity. compression and g-verb was use extensivly. please feel free to comment and rate its quality. im curious to see if you all like it or not.
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Jun 11, 2008 07:16 am High hat is a bit too harsh for me... might be a couple syncopation issues in the beginning... other than that... sounds about right.
Jun 11, 2008 08:40 pm I'll try and give it a listen a bit later or tomorrow.
Jun 11, 2008 08:50 pm oi...the hihat was obnoxious, the chunky guitar was OK but the noise over the top was...I dunno...just not pleasant, even for the genre.
That said, this isn't my style at all, but it had it's good points and bad points. Tone down the hihat and clean up the "leads" or whatever that top noise is called.
How many different sub genre's of metal that ends with "core" are there anyway and what's the difference between 'em?
Jun 11, 2008 09:28 pm Yep, the guitars sounded fine. You got that nailed. But the drums sound very un-natural to me. There needs to be some variation in the kick burst's. By that I mean vary the velocity and timing of the hits. This will give it a more natural feel. You can tell it was obviously sequanced in the high speed parts. It doesn't sound nearly as un-natural in the slower parts. The toms in certain area's suffer from the same fate.
The distorted vocal bits in some area's get completely lost in the sonic onslaught of the guitar's and stuff.
But otherwise you have a good start on this for sure.
Jun 11, 2008 10:09 pm yea its tuff to get everything right. ive been doing this for a few years now, and i have some ideas that may help the production quality of my tracks. i dont have much to work with, but im trying to get better at it. thanks for the feedback.
"deathcore" is a sub-genre od death metal. its a fusion of punk, deathmetal, and emo/screamo. there is deathcore, grindcore, noisecore, deathgrind, cybergrind (drum programming), brutal deathgrind/core/metal. its a crazy long list.
Jun 13, 2008 02:40 am what are your guitars tuned to, they sound hell low...did you recoerd them straight into the computer? No amp?
Jun 14, 2008 02:23 pm Seems to be alot of extra noise going on, like maybe your pre's are too hot. When recording a couple channels this is not soooooo bad, but when stacking track upon track the combined noise can get nasty.
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