fixed a tune sorta - gotta get away
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Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002
Feb 19, 2008 09:55 pm I'll catch it tomorrow. I've got an early morning and am trying to get my arse to bed.
CptTrippsCzar of Turd PolishMember
Since: Jun 20, 2006
Feb 20, 2008 11:19 am Work speakers once again, so take it with a grain of salt.
Guitars sound good...
I like the lo-fi sounding vocals and the lyrics are very good, but...
It sounds like you started projecting with your voice a little more in the second verse and after, the first sounded kind of forced\shy I guess you could say.
It is a good song indeed although the end was kind of abrupt for me. Mostly thumbs up though!
Noize2uCzar of MidiAdministrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002
Feb 25, 2008 10:41 pm Very nice Tony, sorry it took so long to give a listen.
I really liked the way you did the vocal parts up on this one. They really jump out at you.
I'll have to go back and listen to the original now to compare them.