New Sequester song!! (metal of course)

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Member Since: Dec 23, 2005

Well thanks to some EQ advice, I got one of my demo songs complete. It is rough in some areas, but I think for a demo it will do nicely :)

"Homeland"
www.soundclick.com/bands/...m?bandID=481743

Let me know what you think :D

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Conjurer of Emotion
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Since: Jan 14, 2006


Aug 26, 2006 12:12 pm

I like the vox man. Sounds very nice. I would say that only perhaps the clarity of the ryhthm guitars could improve over time, but other than that you already have a great sound, and like I said, I like your voice.

Czar of Midi
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Since: Apr 04, 2002


Aug 26, 2006 06:27 pm

I liked the guitar tones you choose. Nice and thick and they sound well placed in the mix. The leads sound very good as well. Nice and clear there. I agree the rythm guitars can be made a littel better, but time and experimenting will get that. These sound just fine. The drums are sounding very good as well. The bass comes through just enough to not be over powering as well. The chorus vocals could be made a little clearer as well, but again that is something that will come in time. I would try and work on the middle tones of the chorus parts as they are just a little bright.

Over all I love the tune. The arrangement is well done and sounds like you have put some time into this mix for sure.

Noize

Member
Since: Dec 23, 2005


Aug 26, 2006 07:37 pm

Right on! Glad you guys liked it!
Yea the choruses got a bit messy at times. I should probably sing it more clearly, but also there is that constant nagging thing called EQ that I am still fighting with ;) Thanks for the thorough input.

Member
Since: Dec 23, 2005


Aug 27, 2006 03:32 am

I went and had another go at mixing Homeland. I added another rhythm to some parts, tried doing some EQ stuff again, and dealt with some volume issues.

I think it sounds much better, especially that first chorus, but I'm curious to see what you guys think.

Edit: The only thing that is bothering me about the drums is the hi hat, which I cannot seem to make any better due to not being able to put any alteration in the hit itself.
Do you think the drums are good enough for a demo? Or do I have to look for a drummer..

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