New Song (Metal!!!)

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Member Since: Sep 08, 2004

I don't post here much, but I read every day (in fact I may be here a little tooo much..hehe) Anyway, thanks to this site I got into computer based home recording and am just now getting the hang of it. I have just posted a rough instrumental mix of one of 4 songs that are going to be on my demo. I am recording the vocals in the next couple of weeks. But for now I am looking for opinions and constructive critisism of ALL types.

download.com/controlledchaos

Thanks,
Kerry

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A small pie will soon be eaten
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Since: Aug 26, 2004


Jan 27, 2005 06:20 pm

I'm going to try again later! for some reason the DL was slow as. was going to take me about 3 hours to get it.

But i will get it :)

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Since: Sep 08, 2004


Jan 27, 2005 07:04 pm

Yeah, download.com is being dead slow today. Hopefully they are just having temporary troubles. If they keep going I think it will be a kickass music site (they already are for programs!!!)


Later,
Kerry

Pinnipedal Czar (: 3=
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Since: Apr 11, 2004


Jan 27, 2005 10:18 pm

Quite Metal . heh

There's some pretty original sounding stuff going on, within a very rigid rhythm structure . Cool solos, and evertything's on top...

... S'good stuff, man ! Maybe bring the bass guitar up a bit ?

Likin' the brick wall at 2:19 .

How'dya do the guitar ? Good metal tone .

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Since: Sep 08, 2004


Jan 29, 2005 11:47 am

Thanks Hue!! I know there aren't many metal fans on this site, but definatly a good deal of top notch musicians, so all comments are welcome.
I intend to bring the bass guitar up a bit as well as give it a good eq and mastering (this is basically just a pre-master.)

The guitars are actually the V-AMP pro. There are 4 rhythm guitars; 2 panned hard left, 2 hard right. The two main guitars have the same eq(hard left/hard right) and the two "harmony" rhythms have a slightly lower volume and different eq(hard left/hard right). That is about it.

Later,
Kerry

A small pie will soon be eaten
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Since: Aug 26, 2004


Jan 29, 2005 07:09 pm

See thats someone esle talkihg about V-amp's to Hue! He'll go crazy till he gets one i think.

Sorry about the late reply chaos! This song is certainly rocks. i have't listen to metal this hard for years.

This is certainly one of the better metal song's i've heard in a long time. I love when it goes slower too - works really well in the song.

The Bass drum is hit how many times? :)

Pinnipedal Czar (: 3=
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Since: Apr 11, 2004


Jan 30, 2005 08:24 pm

heh heh V-amp... cool . Thanks for the break-down Kerry, I'm gonna give that panning way a whirl... sounds good .


Czar of Midi
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Since: Apr 04, 2002


Feb 07, 2005 04:32 pm

Well I gotta agree the guitars dont sound too bad at all. I like the lead guitar parts for sure. Not a huge fan of this genre to be honest, but I like it when its done well, and you have done that for sure. I too would like to hear the bass with bit more punch to bring it out in the mix a bit.

I would honestly like to hear it with the second guitars not panned hard left and right. It might help fill the sonic picture a bit better. With both sets of guitars panned hard left and right they tend to be fighting a bit for the space, and that might be contributing to the bass not sounding punchy enough as well.

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Since: Jun 01, 2004


Feb 22, 2005 03:44 am

great guitar playing man. the riffs were interesting and you had that real heavy sound without it being abrasive.
harry

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Since: Feb 29, 2004


Mar 29, 2005 01:37 pm

I know I'm a month or two late but i just noticed this. Probably the only thing here like what I record.

Guitars have awesome sound and tone but could be a little more lively sounding. The bass could be compressed and go up a little. The solos are a little loud.

I hate the synth/triggered drum sound. The drums parts themselves are really good.

Hold 'Em Czar
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Since: Dec 30, 2004


Mar 30, 2005 12:36 pm

wow! this totally sounds like you got the black metal sound you were shootin' for...i don't listen to alotta this stuff, but i have quite a few friends who do. i'd hafta A/B this with some of that stuff to really notice anything that dosn't sound "right"....the drums are a bit quiet...other than that it sounds good.

did he just say "let's make ****?"

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Since: Feb 18, 2004


Apr 01, 2005 06:08 am

Hi
I listened to the first song. Guitars are nice, but vocal imho should be spreaded much more, it sounds to much alone in the forest of guitars, I think delays and reverbs can help here. And I do not hear a snare, but maybe the song sounds even more interesting without it.

Idiot.
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Since: Apr 22, 2004


Apr 09, 2005 12:28 am

METAL! :D

woop woop.. metalmetal.. :D

I likes it on the whole, however you need to get a brighter sound, specially on the vox and drums.

I personally would mix up the tempos a bit more, but that's just me (I like stuff spastic).

More blastbeats, tom fills and doublekicking!

Needs more.. movement, Scarve style.

And hoorah for the v-amp! go go metal go! Sounds like the Modern High Gain setting... could do with a bit more very high highs in the EQ.

*sticado: short and LOUD!*
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Since: Feb 25, 2005


May 12, 2005 10:34 pm

im in a metal band... hey maybe we can play together sometime... i play in melbourne and satellite beach (once in titusville).

i started recording so we didnt have to pay studio time cuz time is wut we need and my band's tryin to make it so we need CDs.

www.dreadingthelight.com

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