Latest attempt at my song

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Member Since: Feb 03, 2003

Okay, I worked on some stuff. Let's see how I did.

Here's the new version.

www.mintpink.net/music/Mi...ngAwayTest2.mp3


And incase you want to compare, here's the old version...

www.mintpink.net/music/Mi...ngAwayTest2.mp3

Let the comments commence


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Since: Feb 18, 2004


Jun 16, 2004 03:31 pm

Very bad, you left nothing to criticize for me ;).
Good mix.

Nothing doesnt give me gas
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Since: May 25, 2004


Jun 16, 2004 11:56 pm

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!
3 THUMBS UPPA!!!!!!

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Since: May 09, 2004


Jun 17, 2004 12:07 am

Wow! Very much improved. Definately nailed the distorted guitar tones this time! Hey guitwizz, I'm scared to ask where the third thumb's comin from hehehe

Jazzyone: you outta see if any local radio station has an independent music feature, they'd be morons NOT to play this, catchy hooks both instrumental and vocally

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Since: Jan 28, 2003


Jun 17, 2004 12:45 am

Definitely much improved. All I would say is maybe back off the bace a bit and turn up the vocals a bit (may not need to do the second one if you do the first). This is very good though.

Your favorite rockstar
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Since: Feb 03, 2003


Jun 17, 2004 08:50 am

Thanks guys for your comments, and thanks for taking the time to listen.

Mike, we have a station here that heavily supports local music, with a weekend show dedicated to it, and many sponsored shows. In fact, next weekend they're putting on a "Music Summit" where they are bringing in some people from 6 of the major labels to give feedback on demos, give tips on cracking the music biz, etc. This is the demo I'm working on to give them.

Coolo, that's exactly what my bandmates said, so that's going to be my final (deadline is Friday) adjustment.

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