Finally a New song by me
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Posted on May 17, 2004 02:20 pm
presley_07
Bohemian
Member Since: May 04, 2003
Hey all
Could you please give critics on this song
it's finished as far as I can hear but I would really like to hear your opinions
if you can Plz play the Hi-Fi cuz the Lo-fi is awfull
www.soundclick.com/bands/4/presleymusic.htm
It's called : "Never saw it coming"
Music was written by a friend of me
The words were written by me
I'm singing it as well
covered everything I guess
Don't be too hard:P
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May 17, 2004 02:25 pm ow there's a mistake I was playing with the Gate a little to much so it took some bites out of the song not to much though 2 times hardly noticable:P
May 18, 2004 08:17 am anyone?
May 18, 2004 08:22 am normally I don't go to soundclick cuz I hate the fact their popups get around blockers and crap...or mine at least, but I went anyway to listen.
Nice mellow song, I am not typically into this kind of ballady stuff, but your voice fits it well and the recording is done very nicely. Good work.
May 18, 2004 08:29 am thx man This ain't my thing normally either but sometimes it just comes off like that
You know:D
thx for listening:D
May 18, 2004 12:41 pm Really liked this song. Piano sounded good! Great voice!
May 18, 2004 12:42 pm If ya wanna hear presley rock out, listen to the tunes in my profile...all but one are him singing.
presley kicks butt.
May 18, 2004 01:52 pm Thx CompSem for your kind words the piano is ALL yamaha s90 :D
dB thanks again you always have those cool words for singing whaha like
Presley kicks butt
or vocal magic
it's just
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 18, 2004 02:03 pm its just?
May 18, 2004 02:25 pm lol that's what happens when watching a movie and trying to type something
It's just me singing was what should've been there
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 19, 2004 09:00 am lol. its a cool tune man, you got an ace voice.
good work!
May 19, 2004 09:04 am thx dude:D
CrashIgnorance Is StrengthMember
Since: Nov 10, 2002
May 19, 2004 10:49 am wow, really soulful tune - I can almost hear the choir from the First Babtist church in the background.
I dig it.
TheTincanbugsloppy dice, drinks twiceMember
Since: Aug 05, 2003
May 19, 2004 01:10 pm I don't listen to this style of music much, it's a little pop for me. I thought the singing and playing were both very good. Did I hear a key change in there? Interesting, I don't hear a lot of key changes in amateur recordings, yours was pulled off well. It feels to me like you have just the right amount of words per line in this song, it felt like it flowed smoothly.
tonyd1970The fat one always watches us.Member
Since: Nov 08, 2002
May 19, 2004 03:54 pm Sound clik is annoying. but.... man what a great voice. great job, i would suggest 1 thing. a vst "wulter" thingy for the organ sound. great stuff though. thumbs up
May 19, 2004 04:52 pm Thx guys
Yes a key change A whole step
Like some of you may know I'm on a music school (conservatory) and this is going to be one of three songs I'll be singing on my "overgangs auditie" don't know how to say that in English
it's passing audition literally
it means I have to do an audition (again) so they can see if I improved over the last year and if they'll let me go to the next year
CrashIgnorance Is StrengthMember
Since: Nov 10, 2002
May 19, 2004 05:33 pm you pass as far as I'm concerned
TheTincanbugsloppy dice, drinks twiceMember
Since: Aug 05, 2003
May 19, 2004 08:14 pm i'd hire ya
May 20, 2004 08:34 am lol :D I hope there are way better guys than me around specially at my school^o)
flame...bringing sexy backMember
Since: Jul 01, 2002
May 20, 2004 10:32 am you must have some awesome classmates then...