Can you please check this out, what do you think?

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Member Since: Mar 09, 2006

Hey ya'll,

Been hard at work here on the demo stuff. The advice you all has provided as been second to none. Here's the second song we have done:
www.freakattraction.com/Gone.mp3
If you can all check it out and let me know what you think it would be awsome. What's good? What's bad? doesn't matter, I value all your opinions and put it into our recodings to make it sound better!!! If you have any questions at all I would be more than happy to answer them also.

Thanks all!!!

Pharic
www.freakattraction.com

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Czar of Midi
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Since: Apr 04, 2002


Mar 27, 2006 11:47 pm

Hey Pharic, been a log day so I will be checking it out tommorrow. I 'll let ya know what I think then.

Noize

Czar of Midi
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Since: Apr 04, 2002


Mar 28, 2006 10:01 pm

Pharic, I like the tune. Nice raw vocal gong on there. The guitar solo as well was very raw sounding, in a good way. It fit in nicely. I am going to have to give it a listen a bit louder to really give any critique though so your gonna have to wait one more day for that as its kinda late here and I cant be crankin it up at the moment.

Definately got a rockin feel to it.

Noize

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Since: Mar 09, 2006


Mar 29, 2006 08:48 am

Thanks Noize, much appreciated and I have no prob about waiting for a better listen to it on your behalf. I glad you like the sound we're going after, that raw tone, like a shot of straight whisky first thing in the morning. I did some remixing on it already from other critique, but still really interested in what you have to say about it once cranked!!!

Thanks again Noize,

Pharic
www.freakattraction.com

Czar of Midi
Administrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002


Mar 29, 2006 08:47 pm

I think after a little louder listen the only thing I could really say that might need any attention is the vocal. Like I stated above, I like the raw feel of it. It fits very well in the tune. You might want to bring its level down a tiny bit though as it is sitting a little to present in the mix. It doesnt really need to come down very far at all, just a tiny bit.

On this listen the guitar sounded even better. And again, I love the raw sound of the guitar solo, very straight and simple. The drums and bass are perfect as they are. Very driving tune with some emotion to it.

Noize

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Since: Mar 09, 2006


Mar 30, 2006 05:41 pm

Thanks Noize!!!

All fixed up now, like I said I really respect the feedback from this forum. Probably why we get such a raw sound is because we keep stuff as simple as possible. No need to over complicate alot of things. Gone was a simple song to do. Since you like the guitar tracks:

1) Acoustic playing the lead on the verse
2) Electric playing the lead on the verse also
3) Acoustic rythum playing rythum througout the whole tune
4) Electric on the chorus
5) Electric on the solo

Was very impressed with the guitar myself and the raw sound!!!

Thanks again Noize and hope you enjoyed it!!!

Pharic
www.freakattraction.com

Czar of Midi
Administrator
Since: Apr 04, 2002


Mar 31, 2006 06:36 pm

Pharic, indeed I definately liked that tune. The other as well was good.

Hope to hear more from you guys in the future.

Noize

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